A 35-second sample for a fictional food plant: branded opener, PPE, Pedestrian & Traffic Safety and the separate QR quiz screen. Below it is a sample of what Milestone 1 looks like: a scene-by-scene footage map and a shot-gap list in exactly the format from your post.
Pure motion graphics, so you can see the graphic treatment I would use wherever the existing footage has gaps. In the real video these graphics sit between and on top of your plant footage.
Sound on: calm voiceover, music bed well under the voice, subtle sound effects. Sound off: the captions carry everything.
Every graphic is timed to the narration, so the visitor sees each rule at the moment it is spoken.
0:00 OpenerBranded title with the chapter overview, so visitors know what is coming.
0:08 PPEEach item appears on the visitor the moment the voice names it, with an ISO-style sign and a short callout.
0:18 Pedestrian & TrafficTop-down plant map: visitors wait at the crossing, the forklift passes with a clear safety zone.
QR screenSeparate quiz screen, built as its own file so it can run on a lobby screen after the video.
This is how I hand over the review: what we have, what is missing, and where a graphic does the job instead of a new shoot. Plant, clips and timecodes here are made up for the example.
| Scene | Existing footage | Additional footage | Alternative graphic treatment | Decision |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 · Welcome0:00–0:15 | Drone/exterior clip of the main gate (IMG_4127, 0:12–0:20), stable, usable. | None needed. | Branded opener + chapter overview over the exterior clip, colour-matched. | Use existing |
| 2 · PPE0:15–0:40 | Staff putting on hairnets in the locker room (IMG_4301), but one person has no glasses in frame. | One clean 6 s shot of a visitor putting on all four items in order. | Animated visitor figure with the four items + ISO mandatory signs (as in this sample). | Re-shoot 1 shot or animate |
| 3 · Pedestrian & Traffic Safety0:40–1:05 | Forklift in the warehouse (IMG_4410), shot from the walkway, but a person crosses outside the green lines at 0:07. | Visitor group inside the marked walkway, forklift at a safe distance (spec below). | Top-down plant map with walkway, crossing and forklift zone (as in this sample). Cut IMG_4410 before 0:07. | Trim + new shot |
| 4 · Manufacturing Line & Machine Safety1:05–1:35 | Line footage (IMG_4522, IMG_4523) is strong, but an operator reaches into the conveyor at 0:14. | Visitors watching the line from behind the barrier, wide. | Animated "do not touch / stay behind the barrier" callouts over the line footage. Clip IMG_4523 removed (shows reaching in). | Partly usable |
| Scene | Shot required | Action | Framing | Suggested duration | Important |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Pedestrian & Traffic Safety | Visitors in the marked walkway | Two or three visitors in full PPE walk inside the green walkway towards camera. Forklift moves in its own aisle in the background. | Wide, camera at walkway level | 6–8 s | Forklift stays at least the plant's minimum distance away. Nobody steps on the lines. |
| Pedestrian & Traffic Safety | Stop at the crossing | Group stops at the stop line, the forklift passes the crossing, the driver gives the "go" sign, the group crosses. | Medium, side-on to the crossing | 5–8 s | Real crossing with floor markings visible. Forklift at walking speed, horn/beacon on. |
| PPE | Putting on PPE in order | One visitor puts on hairnet, safety glasses, hi-vis vest, then shows the safety shoes. | Medium, then a short close-up of the shoes | 6 s | All hair inside the net. Vest closed. Same order as the script. |
| Manufacturing Line & Machine Safety | Viewing the line from behind the barrier | Visitors stand behind the yellow barrier and watch the line running. | Wide, from behind the visitors | 5–6 s | Hands stay at their sides. No visitor near moving parts, no guards opened. |
| Food Safety & Hygiene | Hand washing at the entry station | Visitor washes hands at the hygiene station, then uses the sanitiser. | Close-up on hands, then medium | 4–6 s | Follow the plant's posted hand-wash steps exactly. No jewellery visible. |
| Emergency Preparedness | Assembly point | Calm walk from the exit door to the assembly point sign, group gathers. | Wide, exterior | 5 s | Assembly-point sign readable. Walking, not running. |
I don't rewrite safety rules. Every on-screen text and caption comes straight from your approved script, and each review version comes with a short list of all on-screen texts with timecodes, so QSE can check them line by line.
I check every shot against your "never show" list before it goes into the edit: no visitors near running machines, no reaching in, no bypassed guards, no restricted areas, no shortcuts.